The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The given chart depicts information about the divergent types of

water

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used between the world's continents.

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it can be seen that in most parts of the

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world

water

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is used for agricultural

purpose

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. We can

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see that the lowest percentage is destinated for domestic use.

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, continents

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as Africa, Central Asia and Southwest Asia show a

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higher percentage of

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used for agricultural maintenance, accounting for more than 80% in these places,

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in Europe the same use of

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is lower, comprehending just 32%.

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, North America and Europe present both the highest amount of

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used for Industrial means, being responsible for 48% and 53% respectively.

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, South America is responsible for the highest percentage of

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used domestically, accounting for 19%. To summarize, it is possible to confirm that in all the six continents the less used destination of

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is inside houses.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

water consumption
agricultural, industrial, domestic
usage patterns
developed vs developing regions
irrigation systems
climate factors
percentage breakdown
water management
sustainability
residential water use
efficiency
charts comparison
water-intensive
water scarcity
resource allocation
desalination

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