Many young people move out of their homes to live alone or to live with their friends. Some people think this is a good idea. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued that most youngsters leave their homes to live separately or shift with their friends as well, they think it is a good idea to become self-dependent. I agree with
this
statement because it gives privacy and a person can be stronger when he explores a challenging world.
First,
youth starts
living alone when they graduate Correct subject-verb agreement
start
as well as
in the crucial stage of their careers. They want to take
their own decisions without any interference from others. Correct your spelling
make
Therefore
, staying with friends is also
a big move for them to get their freedom. In a recent survey, a USA university shows 90% of young people stay alone to enjoy their freedom, which helps them to achieve their goals .
Secondly
, when they live alone they face numerous difficulties from managing home chores to office works
that give them self-confidence. In fact, they become able to deal with problems which come with day-to-day life. Correct subject-verb agreement
work
For example
, I live
in Canada for three years with my friend Wrong verb form
have lived
that
is
my first experience when I live away from my parents I was worried in the initial days because I was totally dependent on my parents for everything but after some time I started doing everything myself and now I become fully independent.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
was
although
some oppose that young people should live with their families because society needs unity and bond between them, living alone is someone's choice so , people need to respect other decisions and support them to make them successful.Submitted by grewalpt1249 on
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task response
Address the opposing viewpoint and provide a balanced argument. Support your claims with clear examples and evidence.
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