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Many young people move out of their homes to live alone or to live with their friends. Some people think this is a good idea. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Deciding where to live is one of life's more difficult choices for youngsters. One may opt for life in the home or with
friends
. In my opinion, living in your own
place
 is more advantageous.
This
 is
due to
 the fact that the house is the safest
place
 in
this
 world.
firstly
, nowadays youngsters face different challenges
such
 as the complicated education system,
as well as
 economic disturbances.
Consequently
, they try to become mature and willing to earn money and take care of their parents
also
. ,
Moreover
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 they move to cities and stay alone or with colleagues to start their journey. Not only that some teenagers follow their high studies, and do jobs equally. But the real problem is completely different. Too much freedom can end them in bad company and
also
 drugs.
Secondly
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 they need time to bloom. If they take the battle
to
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 their hands at a very little age, it seems to be more possibility to lose. The love and care we receive from our own
place
 are worthless. No one care or battle us if there is a problem.
Friends
 are much more, but real
friends
 are hard to find. There should be some unchangeable reasons to leave the house, but keep in mind to find a suitable
place
 for our circumstances. But some people believe that
,
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this
 option is good. On the other ,hand it teaches people to become independent. Despite all the bad ,things there are some, who achieve their targets.
To conclude
, I believe staying with family is the best thing than living alone or with
friends
.
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