The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002.

The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002.
The provided line graph gives information about the
rate
of river water in the Uk ( Wales, Scotland, Northern Ireland and England) that are classified as having good chemical
quality
from 1990 to 2002. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, the
rate
of chemical
quality
in water in Wales and Scotland witnessed an opposite trend and stagnated almost unchanged during the
period
given. The same share for Northern Ireland and England fluctuated over the span given. In 1990 the
rate
of chemical
quality
in Wales was just above 95% and stayed unchanged till 1998. From 1998
this
figure declined dramatically
till
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85%. The same share for Scotland
also
stagnated till 1999 (95%) .
This
figure
rised
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rises
rose
raised
significantly till 99% in 2000 and stayed unchanged till the end of the
period
. A dramatic decline from 93%
till
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85% was the case
on
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the percentage of chemical
quality
in Northern Ireland between 1990-1992.
This
index
rised
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rose
raised
rises
sharply and reached a high of 96% in 1994.
Then
this
share plummeted to 82% in 1996 and increased significantly to 96%
in
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the end of the
period
. The same figure for England was 82% in the initial year and
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rose
till
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85% in 1994 and declined
till
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89% in 1998.
This
rate
than
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increased sharply to 90% and stayed unchanged till the end of the
period
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, quality, period with synonyms.
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