The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002.

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The provided line graph gives information about the

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of river water in the Uk ( Wales, Scotland, Northern Ireland and England) that are classified as having good chemical

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from 1990 to 2002. The units are measured in percentages.

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of chemical

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in water in Wales and Scotland witnessed an opposite trend and stagnated almost unchanged during the

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given. The same share for Northern Ireland and England fluctuated over the span given. In 1990 the

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of chemical

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in Wales was just above 95% and stayed unchanged till 1998. From 1998

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85%. The same share for Scotland

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stagnated till 1999 (95%) .

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significantly till 99% in 2000 and stayed unchanged till the end of the

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85% was the case

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the percentage of chemical

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in Northern Ireland between 1990-1992.

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sharply and reached a high of 96% in 1994.

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share plummeted to 82% in 1996 and increased significantly to 96%

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the end of the

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. The same figure for England was 82% in the initial year and

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85% in 1994 and declined

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89% in 1998.

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increased sharply to 90% and stayed unchanged till the end of the

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