You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter in your tutor. Write a letter -describe the situation -explain why you cannot continue at this time - say what action you would like to take

Dear Mrs Simpson, I am writing to inform you that I cannot continue
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your
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in order to go
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work
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trip for a month. You know that I work a full-time job and study a
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evening
course
. Yesterday my principal said that our colleagues were going to Great Britain so as to improve our language experience for a month.
Therefore
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your
course
until we return to our country.
However
, I have to learn computer
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for my career.
Moreover
you know it is
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for me. If you permit me to continue the
course
after I return.
Besides
I would like to learn my computer lessons online if you allow me to do it.
In addition
, Could you send
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me
information
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my email
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If you sent me it, I would be pleased with you. I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours sincerely Parmanova Feruza.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • juggle multiple commitments
  • recent increase in workload
  • intense/stressful period
  • unmanageable schedule
  • withdraw from the course
  • regretfully cannot continue
  • postpone my studies
  • alternative arrangements
  • flexible study options
  • additional responsibilities
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