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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter in your tutor. Write a letter -describe the situation -explain why you cannot continue at this time - say what action you would like to take

#time #job #part #course #tutor #-describe #situation #-explain #action
Dear Sir,
This
 is Akanksha Tiwari I am
student
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 of Business Analysis classes in your coaching form
last
 two
month
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 now I have been facing lots of
issue
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about
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timeing
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time
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 been manage
this
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 my side. I am
working
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 Professional I couldn't manage
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 in working days,
becouse
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because
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was
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recently
join
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 TCS company. It was my first job I
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rotted
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have
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 to
do
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work
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night
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, I am unable to
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class
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evening
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work
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this
 shift intyere month. I
wnated
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wanted
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faver
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favour
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 your side could you please take my class on
saturday
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 or
sunday
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 if possible that will be really
hepfull
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helpful
 for me and I am
realy appericated
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really appreciate
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this
also
 most of the people
those
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who
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thay
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there
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weekend
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. Regard, Akanksha Tiwari
Submitted by t.akanksha.mba on

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • juggle multiple commitments
  • recent increase in workload
  • intense/stressful period
  • unmanageable schedule
  • withdraw from the course
  • regretfully cannot continue
  • postpone my studies
  • alternative arrangements
  • flexible study options
  • additional responsibilities
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