You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter in your tutor. Write a letter -describe the situation -explain why you cannot continue at this time - say what action you would like to take

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Dear Sir,
This
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

is Akanksha Tiwari I am
student
Add an article
a student

The noun phrase student seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of Business Analysis classes in your coaching form
last
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

two
month
Fix the agreement mistake
months

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now I have been facing lots of
issue
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issues

It seems that issue may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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about
Change preposition
with

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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timeing
Correct your spelling
time

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i dont
have
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haven't

There may be an adverb issue here.

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been manage
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

form
Correct your spelling
from

The word form doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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my side. I am
working
Correct article usage
a working

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Professional I couldn't manage
time
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my time

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in working days,
becouse
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because

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I
was
Verb problem
apply

There may be a verb use issue here.

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recently
join
Wrong verb form
joined

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb join. Consider changing it.

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TCS company. It was my first job I
have
Wrong verb form
had

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb have. Consider changing it.

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rotted
Correct article usage
a rotted

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shift
i
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I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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have
Wrong verb form
had

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb have. Consider changing it.

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to
do
Unnecessary verb
apply

The verb do appears to be unnecessary here.

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work
in
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on

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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night
Correct article usage
the night

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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shift
also
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I am unable to
tale
Correct your spelling
take

The word tale doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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class
Fix the agreement mistake
classes

It seems that class may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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in
evening
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the evening

The noun phrase evening seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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,
i
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I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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have to
do
Unnecessary verb
apply

The verb do appears to be unnecessary here.

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work
in
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on

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

shift intyere month. I
wnated
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wanted

If you don’t want wnated to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

one
faver
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favour

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form
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from

The word form doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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your side could you please take my class on
saturday
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Saturday

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or
sunday
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Sunday

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if possible that will be really
hepfull
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helpful

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for me and I am
realy appericated
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really appreciate

The words realy appericated seem to be misspelled. Consider replacing them.

for
this
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also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

most of the people
those
Correct determiner usage
apply

It seems that determiner use may be incorrect here.

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who
working
Wrong verb form
work

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb working. Consider changing it.

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thay
Correct your spelling
there

If you don’t want thay to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

will
also
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

join
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

class
on
Change preposition
at

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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weekend
Correct article usage
the weekend

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. Regard, Akanksha Tiwari

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • juggle multiple commitments
  • recent increase in workload
  • intense/stressful period
  • unmanageable schedule
  • withdraw from the course
  • regretfully cannot continue
  • postpone my studies
  • alternative arrangements
  • flexible study options
  • additional responsibilities
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