You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning a holiday and want to find out about the kinds of holiday packages that can be arranged by a local company. Write a letter to the company to ask for information about the holiday packages they offer. In your letter: • say where and when you would like to go • include details about the kind of holiday you would like to take • say what kind of information you would like to receive Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to understand more deals about tour packages organized by your travel agency. I have gone through your website.

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, I would need more specific information. I am considering visiting northern India especially, in the Himalayan mountain range. I am flexible with any time between December to February, but it would be great if I get a better package

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of December. I am looking for places which are chilly and picturesque,

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, Manali, Kashmir or Darjeeling. But you may suggest places which are more captivating. I am okay to have fewer activities in the itinerary, but the too-hectic schedule will be challenging to manage as I am looking for a relaxed trip.

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, any ancient monument you may consider adding

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as the Taj Mahal in Agra.

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, IT would be great if could share the quotations which include prices, available dates and a detailed plan.

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, please include what is included and excluded in the package. You may email me or call me directly. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any other questions. Thank you. Yours Faithfully, Mr. Ajith Kumar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

197 words

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