Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I do not think the fact that fewer and fewer
languages
remain in use
every year is an important matter as it leads people to live more easily and comfortably. (30 words) One
reason is that communication in most cases becomes easier. It will be really convenient if one
can talk with others from various parts of the world without the need for a live translator or special software for assistance. This
means that different nations around the globe are likely to be able to cooperate more closely if fewer languages
are in use
. For instance
, a conference at the United Nations will be more convenient and productive for politicians if they all can communicate using a limited set of languages
, or perhaps even one
, instead
of having to wait for translations. Consequently
, better results are likely to be achieved more quickly, and many issues could be resolved as a result
of better mutual understanding. (123 words) Furthermore
, there will be less need to spend time learning many languages
for different purposes. At the moment, one
needs to learn various languages
to study in a different country, travel abroad or communicate with foreign friends. However
, if only a few languages
were in use
around the globe, travelers
, immigrants and students at foreign universities could all focus their efforts on their goals without having to worry about their language proficiency. (72 words) In conclusion, I believe that the fall in the number of Change the spelling
travellers
languages
in use
allows people to communicate more easily, as well as
focusing
their energy on more important aims and purposesWrong verb form
focus
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