You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates the correlation between
age
and
crime
rate,
while
the pie chart provides information about different sorts of
crime
in the USA for the
last
year.
Overall
, those who are from 16
years
old to 24
years
old tended to commit
crime
,
while
violent
crime
was the most predominant
crime
in the UK. As can be seen clearly from the graph and the chart, there were no cases of
crime
recorded from 0 to 8
years
old. The starting
age
of
crime
commitment was early - 8
years
old. The people who were 28
years
old tended to commit the
crime
less. The percentage of
this
decreased from 20% to lower 10%. The
crime
rate reached its peach at the
age
of 20. The percentage of
crime
commitment from the
age
of 12 to the
age
of 16 soared dramatically -
This
percentage was more than 10 times than the starting point, followed by a steady decrease to 10% for 60
years
old. Violent misdeed accounts for almost half of the total cases in the UK.
On the contrary
, The proportion for property
crime
and drug
crime
were roughly similar at 23% and 22% respectively.
Finally
, public order
crime
was the least prevalent
crime
at 9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, crime, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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