Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Climate
change
is the greatest
threaten
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to the existence of life on
earth
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Earth
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. Some people suggest that seeking a way to go
along with
climate
change
outwiligh
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outweighs
prevention
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the prevention
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of it. Personally, I strongly
agree
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this
view and believe we should take bolder action towards it.
Firstly
,
climate
change
is detrimental.
Researches
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have proved that
climate
change
will lead to destroy current and future human civilisation.
Melting
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of glaciers and rising
of
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sea
level
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will cause several problems.
Due to
that problem people will emigrate and lose
usefull
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useful
lands and their homeland.
Similarly
, extreme weather
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has become more frequent in causing droughts.
For example
,
due to
defostration
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demonstration
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of
air
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getting worst.
Concequently
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Consequently
, there will be no
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plan
for us to survive if we
dont
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don't
take steps. Global warming is the main cause of
climate
change
. If both people and governments
tak usefull
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take useful
steps to protect
this
issue,
this
can be controlled to be great extent.
For example
, the
governmens
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government
governments
should stop the generation of power from fossil fuels which
cause
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more carbon emissions and increase global warming.
In addition
, green energy
as
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a
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wind, solar and hydropower can
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inversted
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invented
by
government
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.
To conclude
,
it is clear that
global warming and
climate
change
had already started and
ongoing
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,
however
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there is still
chance
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a chance
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to prevent
this
issues
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issue
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. Especially, we should present
better
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climate
to future
generation
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generations
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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