Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be rsponsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the environmental

crisis

is becoming

larger

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and more serious topic.

This

crisis

could eventually lead to

a

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massive and

unreversable

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irreversible

damage to our planet. Some

people

belive

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believe

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that the country should help and protect our

environment

,

while

others say that each person should be responsible for it. In my view, it takes a combination of both ideas in

order

to achieve

healthy

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a healthy

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and clean

environment

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and explain my opinion.

Firstly

, some

people

believe that the

government

should take responsibility since

this

issue is a global

crisis

.

This

problem will not be treated by a small

amount

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of

people

, it takes every single country in the world to unite and together form

legislations

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legislation

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in

favor

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favour

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of preserving the

environment

.

For example

, a few months ago Israel created a rule that uprises the prices of plastic products in

order

to downward the purchase of single-use products.

Consequently

, the purchase of plastic products in Israel rapidly inclined.

Furthermore

, the

government

could help by

educate

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its' citizens about climate change. Once countries from all around the world will decide to raise awareness

to

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the situation of our planet, it will

effect

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affect

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the way

people

see our

environment

and how we should take care of it.

While

it is true that

government

should take

actions

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action

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of improving the

environment

, I tend to concede with the statement that it is only the state's responsibility.

This

problem calls for a shared effort of every single person to change their behaviour towards the planet in

order

to help the next generation live in a better, healthier place.

For example

, donate their old items,

such

as clothes and toys so that different kinds of industries could lower their production. Another example is to have recycle bins in each

persons'

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home

,

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or pick up trash from the street. In conclusion, I think that in

order

to address the environmental

crisis

, it takes the

government

and each individual to take responsibility, in

order

to make the world a

healther

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healthier

place