Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any jobs they want. other feels that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. what is your opinion?

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A few people think that there should be no gender discrimination when choosing a job.

On the other hand

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, some people believe that males and females are not the same with respect to many traits, so women should select only specific positions.

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essay will illustrate

both

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views. As for as my opinion is concerned I am in the favour of second notion.

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with,

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the fertile have equal mental calibre, so they go with any sort of

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sexes get the same opportunities in the field of education. Nowadays, they are enriched with similar skills, especially, since girls are not only more informative but

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innovative in nature,

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why should not

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in any field? If they do not

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in every environment

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it will cause

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the labours.

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ladies are part of almost every

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, even in the army because they have

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level of motivation for

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as men.

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, they should be given

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values to

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, it is

obsorved

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observed

that females are physically weaker than males, so they are not able to withstand

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demanding

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sites. To explicate it, it is

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matter of

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genetic

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that girls are not able to sustain

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that

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normally encountered at

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work places

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is the epitome of tasks which

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alot

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of body strength, and

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they are unable to perform there.

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, the task in which physical

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involvement

is needed should be

lemited

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limited

to males. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying,

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viewpoints are discussed with relevant arguments.

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, I personally, subscribe to the notion that girls are not able to perform

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but they can do only specific

activity

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which

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less

tiredy

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tiring

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

305 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender equality
meritocracy
traditional roles
STEM fields (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
biological differences
physical capabilities
gender stereotyping
job suitability
skills and qualifications
diverse workforce
legal frameworks
societal progress
historical evidence

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any jobs they want. other feels that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. what is your opinion?

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