You recently bought a piece of sports equipment from an online store . When you first used the piece of sports equipment , you find a problem with it . Write a letter to the manager of the online store , In your letter 1. Describe the problem with the piece of sports equipment 2. say what happened because of the problem 3. explain what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Madhur Bathla! I am writing
letter with reference to a suspicious issue that I figured out
using the treadmill which I recently bought from your online store. The machine was working fine for the initial days. After a week's ,usage there has been a blaring noise which comes out from the treadmill whenever I or any of my family members do a running session on the same.
, the irritating sound continues for a
and after a running sprint for five minutes, the machine generates enormous heat and eventually stops operations. I would like to generate a complaint over the company's portal asking the company to initiate a visit request for one of the technicians.
, even if the equipment does not get fixed post the engineer's visit,
in that case it would be my humble request to the organisation for replacing
product with a piece of new equipment. Hope to hear from you soon. Warm Regards, Madhur Bathla
Submitted by madhur.bathla on

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