Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
this
present world learning foreign
languages
, including
English
, is very popular. Parents force their children to study
English
for their successful future. I agree that learning
English
is necessary,
however
, I
also
consider
people
have to know their native
language
and we should help
in
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this
. I will discuss in more detail
this
statement. On the one hand, we need
English
everywhere:
travels
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, jobs, studying and communicating with new
people
. One of the requirements for modern jobs is knowledge
English
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of English
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, so it's the main reason to study it.
In addition
to
this
, nowadays a lot of opportunities to study abroad, but for
this
people
have to pass an
English
test.
For example
,
the
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old friend of mine, Vika is from Russia, but she got
master's
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degree in Taiwan and her
studying
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studies
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was
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in
English
.
On the other hand
, native
language
transfer
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transfers
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culture, knowledge and the way to think. If we want to live in a diverse and interesting world it's very important to solve local
languages
.
It is clear that
not all
people
want to live abroad, a lot of them want to stay at home, of course, they should know their
language
. These
people
should save
traditions
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the traditions
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of their
language
and transfer them to the next generation.
People
from Bali island as a shining example of it. They have a unique culture, which has not changed in spite of many tourists. They know
English
very well
,
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but
also
continue to learn
native
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language
.
Overall
, globalization looks set to continue,
people
have to know
English
for many reasons,
however
, local
languages
must not die if we want to live in a multicultural world. I think that
government
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should fund a lot of cultural projects and
in
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education to solve and multiply traditions and local
languages
.
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Provide more specific examples and personal experiences to support your points.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your ideas are connected in a clear and logical manner. Use transition words and phrases to improve coherence and cohesion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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