The diagram illustrates different stages in the production of recycled paper.
The diagram illustrates different stages in the production of recycled
paper
.
In general, the process of recycling paper
involves 6 main steps starting from collecting paper
and ending with creating paper
by machine.
As can be seen, the first step of making paper
is collecting from the public and companies. Before being transported to the paper
manufacturer to be ready for the next step of production, the waste paper
needs to clarify by workers. The paper
will be eliminated if it is inappropriate.
In the next stage of the process, the paper
is cleaned and pulped in the paper
mill. This
stage also
involves filtering other materials by the workers such
as staples. Following
this
, having been
removed all remnants of ink and glue at the de-inking stage, the Unnecessary verb
apply
paper
is then
put into a machine to create a new paper
that can be used again.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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