■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

    ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of money that
citizens
from Britain between the
ages
of 18 to 65 over have donated for the
years
1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the highest number of British people who donated in the year 1990 was between the
ages
36 to 50,
while
for the year 2010 was between the
ages
of 51 to 65
years
.
Also
, the least percentage of British
citizens
giving out money for both
years
was between the
ages
of 18 and 25
years
. in begin of the year 1900, the number of funds donated among British
citizens
rose from 17% to above 40% from 18
years
to 50
years
, followed by a steady decline of 35% to approximately 32% from 51
years
until 65
years
. in the
last
years
2010,
Furthermore
, there was a progressive increase in the grand given up for charity from about 6% to almost 40% among people aged between 18 to 60
years
, which was
then
followed by a slight reduction to 35% in
citizens
aged 65 and above.
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