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Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discus both views and give your opinion.

#people #television #education #entertainment #discus
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Television
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 is a great invention that people have nowadays. The first purpose of the invention of
television
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 is to share
information
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 with visual addition to the crowd. As
time
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 moves,
television
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 become a great medium to inform people around the world and it has had diverse usage recently,
such
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 as news,
education
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,
entertainment
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, creative publishing, etc. In the 1960 - 1980 era, when Indonesia didn't have enough resources to spread knowledge fairly, the Indonesian government used
television
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 as one of the
media
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 to spread
education
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 to the community, especially students. In that generation, infrastructures were not in good condition yet. The distribution of teachers and schools is still not evenly distributed. To tackle these issues, the government built regional
television
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 stations to transmit the
television
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 signal more evenly to isolated areas, even though only a few householders have
television
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. At that
time
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,
television
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 was the biggest
source
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 of
information
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,
education
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, and
entertainment
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besides
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 radio and newspapers.
As a result
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,
television
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 became the main trendsetter of that day. As
time
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 changes,
television
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 is not the only resource nowadays. Humans invented the
internet
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 as a new origin of
information
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. In line with it, the
Internet
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also
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 became a reliable
source
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 of
education
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. The
Internet
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also
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 evolving to make social
media
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 nowadays. Social
media
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 make folk around the world become more connected and make
information
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 spread evenly and actually. Societies have many resources of
information
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,
education
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, and
entertainment
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 at
this
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time
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.
Consequently
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,
television
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 is not the main
source
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 of both
education
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 and
entertainment
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. In conclusion of
this
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 discussion,
television
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 was the main origin of
education
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 and
entertainment
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. As the world evolves, the
internet
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 and social
media
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 emerge as the new
source
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 of
education
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 and
entertainment
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 and make
the
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apply
show examples
television
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 the second option, or even third option,
source
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 of
education
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 and
entertainment
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. To keep
television
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 exist nowadays,
television
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 stations make entertaining programs that make the crowd still enjoy the
television
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.
As a consequence
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, some communities say that
television
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 is useful only for
entertainment
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.
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