You are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your University ID card. Write a letter to the local Police station. In your letter, -Who are you? -What happened -Ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

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Dear Sir, My name is Xhesjana Mydini.I am a student and I am studying at the

University

of Greenwich.I am studying the profile for digital marketing. The reason why I am writing to you is because I lose my ID

card

at the train station.If I can'

find my

card

the

university

doesn'

leave me to do lessons because I don'

have the

University

card

.When goes to my

university

the door doesn'

open because I do not have my

card

Therefore

,I have a need for my

card

Moreover

,I want to ask you If is possible to apply for a new

card

.If is possible ai would beg you to send me the details of what I should do.I am waiting for your answer. Kind regards, Xhesjana Mydini

Submitted by xhesimydini1 on Wed May 24 2023

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

126 words

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You are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your University ID card. Write a letter to the local Police station. In your letter, -Who are you? -What happened -Ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

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Some employers involve employees in the decision-making process of products and services. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Million of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?