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The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.

The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.
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These tables illustrate how much money is gained by selling fair trade
such
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 as labelled coffee and banana in five European nations in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, as we can see, coffee has a rising trend in all countries which was the highest in the UK and
Switzerland
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.
On the other hand
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, bananas had a wax and wane trend which was the highest in
Switzerland
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 and Denmark. Looking at the first table, it is easily apparent that the UK has the most noticeable rise which was 1.5
millions
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 euros in 1999 and 20
millions
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million
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 in 2004.
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, the second greatest growth belonged to
Switzerland
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 which became twice as high as the prior amount in 2004.
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,
three
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 other countries has the lowest increase in which Denmark and Sweden's sale in 2004 was slightly higher than in 1999. As can be seen in the second table, Sweden and Denmark,
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, has a considerable decrease in sales which was around 1 million.
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, the sales of other states went up significantly in 5 years with
Switzerland
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 having the biggest growth, and
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 the UK
by
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 approximately 4.5 million
intrest
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interest
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words switzerland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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