The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about how people called in the UK that divided three categories a 7-year period from 1995. The data
measuredin billions for local, national, international and mobile calls.
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it is clear thatthere was a substantial increase
ofnational and international, mobile calls
However, the index of local calls experienced
dramaticdecline over the period shown. Looking at the details, the number of international and national calls was around 35 in 1995,
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afterincreasing year by year, it reached
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atpeak of 60 in 2001 and 2002.
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A steadygrowth was the case of the index of mobile phones from around 3 in 1999 till over 45 in 2002. In stark contrast, the index of local calls was just over 20 in 1995. After visible fluctuation
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thisfigure stagnated in 2002,
whileit possessed the leading position with 90 in 1999.
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