The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts give information about how
spend
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money of UK school in 3 ten-year intervals from 1981. The data is measured in proportions for 3 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the shares of salaries of other workers, teachers and resources and furniture equipment experienced
a
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substantial growth over the period shown. Looking at the details, there
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a dramatic decline of other works salaries from its initial 28 % in 1981 to 15% in 2002
while
it was 22% in 19991. The proportion of teachers’ salaries and resources, like books witnessed
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rise
10
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% and 5% between 1981 and 1991,
while
these figures possessed 45 % and 9 % from
its
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initial 40 and 15 respectively. The number of spending money
for
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insurance was 2 %
1981
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in 1981
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after decades it rocketed to 8%. There was a visible decrease of 5% of the share for furniture equipment in 1991,
while
this
figure was 15 %, 10 years before
this
index went up over 20 %.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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