The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts give information about how
spend
money of UK school in 3 ten-year intervals from 1981. The data is measured in proportions for 3 years.
Add the particle
to spend
Overall
, it is clear that
the shares of salaries of other workers, teachers and resources and furniture equipment experienced a
substantial growth over the period shown.
Looking at the details, there Remove the article
apply
were
a dramatic decline of other works salaries from its initial 28 % in 1981 to 15% in 2002 Change the verb form
was
while
it was 22% in 19991. The proportion of teachers’ salaries and resources, like books witnessed steady
rise Correct article usage
a steady
10
% and 5% between 1981 and 1991, Change preposition
of 10
while
these figures possessed 45 % and 9 % from its
initial 40 and 15 respectively.
The number of spending money Correct pronoun usage
their
for
insurance was 2 % Change preposition
on
1981
after decades it rocketed to 8%. There was a visible decrease of 5% of the share for furniture equipment in 1991, Change preposition
in 1981
while
this
figure was 15 %, 10 years before this
index went up over 20 %.Submitted by moxinurabjalilova on
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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