During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter -remind him when and where you met -tell him what kind of job you are interested in -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear ds, Hope you are doing well! I

also

hope you remember me, we met during our flight to Paris

last

Monday. I was sitting next to you in the aisle seat, where we started discussing the flight menu. With our common interest in food, we got into talking about our backgrounds and jobs. You advised me to contact you for a possible job opportunity at one of your restaurants. I found an opening at your restaurant "Sweet Paris Creperie", Austin location for a Sous chef position with distinct expertise in molecular gastronomy. I am quite interested in

this

position and would love to apply for it. I have done my Master's major in molecular gastronomy in 2019 and since

then

, I have been actively incorporating it into my work at 34 lava restaurant. I would be an excellent fit for the Sous chef position as

along with

my academic knowledge and work experience, I have great collaboration and people skills to work with a team of chefs. I would truly appreciate it if you could consider my profile for

this

job. I have attached my resume with

this

letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sanu Das

Submitted by sanu.das92 on Wed May 24 2023

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