The line graph illustrates the average emissions of carbon dioxide by each person in several countries in Europe from 1967 to 2007
The carbon dioxide emanation per individual in Italy, Portugal,
Sweden
and the United Kingdom, between 1967 and 2007 is clearly accessible in the given graph.
Overall
, CO2 emission
per person averages up to 12 metric tonnes
, in which Italy and Portugal drastically increased while
the United Kingdom and Sweden
dropped gradually in
a span of 40 years.
In terms of co2 Change preposition
over
emission
metric tonnes
, in 1967, the United Kingdom is the highest with an average of 10.5 tonnes
. Sweden
is second to the topmost, while
Italy is the second to nethermost and Portugal is last
. However
, in the year 2007, results clearly stated that all the countries except UK and Sweden
increased consistently. Italy reached an average of 8 co2 metric tonnes
and Portugal reached up to 5.5 tonnes
. Nevertheless
, among the four, in a span of 40 years, UK and Sweden
consistently dropped co2 emission
metric tonnes
but still remained at the top. The Co2 emission
per individual of Portugal and Sweden
sharply rose while
the remaining countries slumped the co2 emission
per person.Submitted by manalangbobkervin on
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