The line graph illustrates the average emissions of carbon dioxide by each person in several countries in Europe from 1967 to 2007

The line graph illustrates the average emissions of carbon dioxide by each  person in several countries in Europe from 1967 to 2007
The carbon dioxide emanation per individual in Italy, Portugal,
Sweden
and the United Kingdom, between 1967 and 2007 is clearly accessible in the given graph.
Overall
, CO2
emission
per person averages up to 12 metric
tonnes
, in which Italy and Portugal drastically increased
while
the United Kingdom and
Sweden
dropped gradually
in
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a span of 40 years. In terms of co2
emission
metric
tonnes
, in 1967, the United Kingdom is the highest with an average of 10.5
tonnes
.
Sweden
is second to the topmost,
while
Italy is the second to nethermost and Portugal is
last
.
However
, in the year 2007, results clearly stated that all the countries except UK and
Sweden
increased consistently. Italy reached an average of 8 co2 metric
tonnes
and Portugal reached up to 5.5
tonnes
.
Nevertheless
, among the four, in a span of 40 years, UK and
Sweden
consistently dropped co2
emission
metric
tonnes
but still remained at the top. The Co2
emission
per individual of Portugal and
Sweden
sharply rose
while
the remaining countries slumped the co2
emission
per person.
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