The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph displays the amount of consuming and producing electricity in some global countries in 2014.
thisdiagram illustrates that
Chinawas at the top of both consuming and producing electricity in
thisfield, followed by the USA whose usage and creation imminent
In contrast, as the chart reveals, the latter was Korea which either consumed
andproduced the lowest level of electricity.
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Furthermore, the People's Republic of
Chinahas contained a humongous number of populations more than others which could be a reason
Chinawas a dominator of the consuming and producing power at the same time. The more people they have, The more resources they will make. Meanwhile, the USA dominated the second factor who used and made the power respectively. Yet,
whilethe huge capital was massively consuming and producing, Korea was a country where the power production and consumption were a small number forwarded by Germany, Brazil, Canada
as well asFrance where the average was sequentially the same level.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china with synonyms.