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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packing of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 bar chart illustrates the number of
seals
,
whales
 and
dolphins
 recorded in Gormez straits from the
year
 2006-2018. In 2006,
seals
 reached the highest of above 40 numbers
whereas
,
whales
 and
dolphins
 reached 25 and 15. By the
year
 2010,
seals
 and
dolphins
 dropped down eventually and
whales
 remained the same with a slight raise in numbers of 25.
Moreover
, In 2014,
dolphins
 and
seals
 increased gradually by 35 and 32 and
whales
 remained in the same position with a small decrease of 22. 2018 was the grace period for
seals
 and
dolphins
. They reached 45
seals
 and 52
dolphins
 and acquired the highest amount
among
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in
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 the following years.
However
,
whales
 gained the least population in the
year
 2018 but reached the highest of 28
among
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in
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 the following years. Over the years,
seals
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the seals
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 population area fluctuates up and down meanwhile, the number of
dolphins
 increases gradually. On
contrary
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,
whales
 maintain the same level with a slight increase in population in the
year
 2018.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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