The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at the beginning of the 21st Century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at the beginning of the 21st Century.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
In the 21st century, The constant development experienced by the metropolis of Harton is illustrated by the given map. The essay will be brief by pointing out all the important details.
Overall
, the major change in the
lakeside
is the minimization of the river to the pond because of the development of establishments in a span of 9 years.
To begin
with, the 2000
Lakeside
, has many establishments that include: 3 residential areas, warehouses, an art centre, a school, an industrial complex, an old municipality and a huge lake. After some years,
Lakeside
developed and changed some establishments like the reduction of townhouses into one.
In Addition
, Shopping Centre, Multi-Screen Cinema, University, offices, and car park were added for the township's growth.
However
, it is obviously noticeable that one of the big impacts is the removal of the huge lake and expanded establishment called the Industrial Complex. To summarize , in 2009
lakeside
became congested wherein people could not enjoy the beautiful attraction which is the river. Unlike, in the past 9 years, Is an obvious resting place brought by the river.
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