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Continuous learning is key to move forward and achieve goals in any industry, considering that fact I would like to pursue my higher studies in my domain, where I had a wide assortment of interests in the field of information technology. I admire this area and have set an objective to get advanced in this field. Thus, I have chosen your esteemed university to pursue Master of Applied Computing (MAC).

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__,disputes are in plentiful supply.__is useful for nations in our contemporary world.Opinions about the___are varied these days
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_. To sum,up briefly,all things considered:it is my opinion__as many
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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