The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bars provide information about the proportion of different items on which families spent
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their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
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Overall
, it’s clear to see the ratio of food is the highest in 1968. There are three types that had a majority scale which are food, housing, and leisure. the rest of the other 4 items were not noticeable in both two years.
Specifically speaking, comparing the figure for food, the number of 1968 which was the largest ratio in 1968 about 35% was almost double that of 2008(17%). However
, the proportion of leisure, transport. and housing in 1968 was all less than that in 2008, almost half.
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but not least, the remaining themes were all under-represented in the over-percentage, both in 1968 and 2018. It is worth to mention
that was the same number for household goods in different years which was 7%.Change the verb form
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