Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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with, now a large number of sellers are producing items which are having high plastics for packaging. The first Linking Words
reason
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they have lots of ways to hold it looking fresh example putting it in the fridge or decorating it by putting some leaves on the fruit and putting some water frequently. The second Linking Words
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arguments
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bag, they can go to the market every day and clean it after finishing, but they do not do that lieu of they will ask the seller "Can I take more than packaging?". On top Use synonyms
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natural materials have many benefits for Correct article usage
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In conclusion, from what has been discussed above.Protecting the Use synonyms
environment
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plastic
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