Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In more and more modern society these days, the
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attracted
the general public's attention.
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believe that the packaging total increases by the production and supermarkets; there are
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that the buyer chooses to purchase goods with lots of packing.
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with, now a large number of sellers are producing items which are having high plastics for packaging. The first
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is that productions want to keep the fruit fresh longer;
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they have lots of ways to hold it looking fresh example putting it in the fridge or decorating it by putting some leaves on the fruit and putting some water frequently. The second
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is that the manufactury uses
plastic
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in processing to make products look beautiful
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they
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other natural materials. All
people
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know that the waste from daily lives will impacts
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the
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and the water sources,
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, the bottled water after
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by
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,
they
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down the river making some animals like fish die,...
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, there are some
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against
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the amount of packaging of goods raises as
people
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's demand for
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plastics is increasing.
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important
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that the human did not know
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how to recycle things,
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bag, they can go to the market every day and clean it after finishing, but they do not do that lieu of they will ask the seller "Can I take more than packaging?". On top
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reason
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that if
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people
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reduce demand
about
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packing
plastic
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, the manufactury or supermarkets will decrease the
plastic
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. Before long,
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use
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the leaf to hold food or
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bamboo trees to make some equipment like chopsticks, boxes, ...;
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natural materials have many benefits for
people
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and the
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. In conclusion, from what has been discussed above.Protecting the
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is the responsibility of all humans. Reducing the trash from
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plastic
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is an important solution, so
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person will have
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should have
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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