Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In more and more modern society these days, the
environment
has attacted
the general public's attention. Correct your spelling
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While
some people
believe that the packaging total increases by the production and supermarkets; there are also
many people
say
that the buyer chooses to purchase goods with lots of packing. Correct pronoun usage
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This
essay will give some reasons to support both views.
To begin
with, now a large number of sellers are producing items which are having high plastics for packaging. The first reason
is that productions want to keep the fruit fresh longer; although
they have lots of ways to hold it looking fresh example putting it in the fridge or decorating it by putting some leaves on the fruit and putting some water frequently. The second reason
is that the manufactury uses plastic
in processing to make products look beautiful instead
they use
other natural materials. All people
know that the waste from daily lives will impacts to
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environment
and the water sources, for example
, the bottled water after used
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people
, they
will put Correct pronoun usage
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it
down the river making some animals like fish die,...
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On the other hand
, there are some argument
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arguments
that
the amount of packaging of goods raises as Correct word choice
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people
's demand for use
the
plastics is increasing. Correct article usage
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One
important reason
that the human did not know that
how to recycle things, Correct word choice
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for example
: just one
bag, they can go to the market every day and clean it after finishing, but they do not do that lieu of they will ask the seller "Can I take more than packaging?". On top of
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the
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reason
that if the
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people
reduce demand about
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plastic
, the manufactury or supermarkets will decrease the plastic
. Before long, people
use
the leaf to hold food or use
bamboo trees to make some equipment like chopsticks, boxes, ...;the
natural materials have many benefits for Correct article usage
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people
and the environment
.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above.Protecting the environment
is the responsibility of all humans. Reducing the trash from the
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plastic
is an important solution, so one
person will have one
true idea. People
should have further
consideration on this
issue.Submitted by buithuongkt on
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