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Some people think that water is the most important natural resource, while other believe that other resources such as oil and gold are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In today's culture about the ebook,disputes are in plentiful supply.
Book
 is useful for nations in our contemporary world.Opinions about
the
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ebooks are varied these days
due to
 the increasing demand.The question of whether the
book
 is important in our lives worries us.
Although
 most folks think about it in their favour.Personally,l think it is their choice whether the
book
 is harmful or beneficial to the crowd. On the one hand,there is a clear argument that if you want to do well in
book
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,you have to work hard. One of the main reasons for
this
 is the unsustainability of the
book
.
This
 means that the community are hesitant. Another reason is that it is entirely up to people to do what they want.
This
 is only of the factors determining
this
.
On the other hand
,l agree with
this
 idea because it is interesting to me.
That
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 first step to be taken would be to
book
.To alleviate the situation,people should
book
.l believe that
book
 would certainly ameliorate the situation.
This
 is because we needed
Secondly
,we will talk about the ebook.
Finally
,we will focus
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ebook
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. To sum,up briefly,all things considered:it is my opinion
book
 as many
significiant
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significant
 negative(
pozitive
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positive
) effects on society. It is undeniable that since booking has
such
severe
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impacts
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 on the public,
this
 issue needs
further
 attention
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