The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the beginning.

The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the beginning.
The chart below shows the quantity of
coffee
which was exported from different countries from 2002 to 2012.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that all countries gained an increase in exporting
coffee
over the period between 2002 and 2012. Another striking factor is that the most significant growth was recorded in Brazil. In 2002, Costa Rica had the highest figure in exporting
coffee
at 15
million
.
Then
, it fluctuated over the period and reached 20
million
in 2012.
In contrast
, Brazil experienced a steady rise until
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a decline in 2008 at approximately 16%. After
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off at a low point, it saw a rise in 2012 and became the highest at 25
million
. One prominent feature of
this
date is Colombia had the smallest figure at 5
million
in 2002. There was
then
a surge until 2006
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when about 14
million
kilograms of
coffee
was exported from Colombia.
Thereafter
, the figure plunged until 2008 and
then
observed a dramatic increase in 2012, about 4
million
kilograms and 15
million
kilograms respectively.
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