Many people eat at fast food restaurants these days. Fast food seems to fit todays lifestyle. Discuss both the advantaged and disadvantages.

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resturants
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restaurants
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the best
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to eat for
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individuals
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nowadays . some
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think
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food
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fit the lifestyle
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and disadvantages
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eating fast
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hand, Eating fast
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many
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advantages
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don,t
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don't
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how to cook so fast
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for them .
people
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may not have time to do their own meals for many reasons so
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kind of
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will be
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beneficial
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group
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favour junk
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over other foods because they like the taste of it .
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fast
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when
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get confused
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they want to eat if they are too hungry.
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is many problems when
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individuals
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and
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can
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their life .
people
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who always eat fast
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without doing exercise may gain weight and will be obese .
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type of
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can raise the
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cholesterol
in the body and will damage multi organs . so fast
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may make your body weak with time
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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