You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you to
applying
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for the job that you
mentionned
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mentioned
in the newspaper of Tehran City
firstly
I am working in the magazine
such
a client but my contract will be over on 30th July so
this
is the reason
of
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searching for
a new work
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, and after two weeks, I am going to the
deplacing
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displacing
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to the
center
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of Tehran.
Secondly
, after considering your advertisement I found
that is
so suitable for me because, as I
told
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youtold
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, I will be in the centre of Tehran and
fortunanaly
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fortunately
your restaurant is exactly next to my new house, I am really keen on
for
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working in the restaurant in my opinion, it's will be
incredible
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experience in the future for me.
Finally
, I need to know the exact time for
participing
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participating
in your interview because I want to
planning
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for it. Thanks for your help and support. Your
faitfully
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faithfully
, Abdulrahman Omidi
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • currently employed
  • customer service
  • communication skills
  • multitasking
  • hospitality industry
  • reliable
  • adaptable
  • enthusiastic
  • available for an interview
  • start immediately
  • experience
  • flexible schedule
  • team player
  • references
  • skills and abilities
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