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you need to take three days off work because of an important event. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Explain why you have to take time off work Give details such as when and where of the event Approving the importance of the event related to your work Suggest who could cover your place while you are away

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Dear Amar, I am writing
this
 letter regarding the day
off
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of
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request
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a request
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 I have submitted.
Actually
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 I need 3 days' holiday next month, as I am going to Edmonton for an A&W serve fresh
event
. The
event
 is scheduled from
June
 13th to
June
 14th
June
 in Edmonton City Centre.
Therefore
, I need a holiday from 12th
June
 to 14th
June
 as the
event
 will start at 7.00 am on 13
June
. As, I told you earlier as well that my paternal uncle served as regional manager of A&W in the Edmonton region for 25 years and now, he is invited as a chief guest. He keenly wants me to join him.
Moreover
, that
event
 will be very helpful for business as well because I told me that the company will launch brew bar drinks
as well as
 give training. In
this
 way, after getting training from them we can add drinks to our menu prior to other locations.
Furthermore
, there is no need to worry about my job duties because I already requested Ayesha to do all the job duties. Hope you will approve my request on
this
 short notice. Waiting for a positive response. Your's faithful, Navjot Kaur
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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