you need to take three days off work because of an important event. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Explain why you have to take time off work Give details such as when and where of the event Approving the importance of the event related to your work Suggest who could cover your place while you are away

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Dear Amar, I am writing

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letter regarding the day

off

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request

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a request

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I have submitted.

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I need 3 days' holiday next month, as I am going to Edmonton for an A&W serve fresh

event

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. The

event

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is scheduled from

June

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13th to

June

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14th

June

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in Edmonton City Centre.

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, I need a holiday from 12th

June

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to 14th

June

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as the

event

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will start at 7.00 am on 13

June

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. As, I told you earlier as well that my paternal uncle served as regional manager of A&W in the Edmonton region for 25 years and now, he is invited as a chief guest. He keenly wants me to join him.

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, that

event

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will be very helpful for business as well because I told me that the company will launch brew bar drinks

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give training. In

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way, after getting training from them we can add drinks to our menu prior to other locations.

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, there is no need to worry about my job duties because I already requested Ayesha to do all the job duties. Hope you will approve my request on

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short notice. Waiting for a positive response. Your's faithful, Navjot Kaur

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

200 words

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it's effect on a child.

The world's most urgent problem is caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?

You have been asked to do a presentation and you would need help with setting up the equipment. Write a letter to your colleague, in your letter: Let him/her know when and where the presentation will take place Tell him/her what equipment you will need Explain how him/her can help you

In some countries, some high school leavers choose to work or travel for a period of time before going to university. Discuss the disadvantages and advantages of these school leavers’ decisions and give your opinion.