You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, Disappointingly, I lost my
laptop
on the
train
when leaving the
train
earlier
this
morning. My
laptop
is an Apple
laptop
with a logo of a Marine compass sticker on it. I was sitting next to an old white man close to the exit of the
train
. I got carried away with the stories the old man was telling me and left my Computer on seat 11 beside me, and When I arrived at my
train
station I was hurrying to get off the
train
for an appointment.
This
computer is very important to me because
i
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use it in school for assignments and
also
I have some important files that it's very confidential to me. Please, don't hesitate to contain me on the phone or text me at (613893878657)and you can
also
send me an email. I am very positive that the
train
conductor looking towards me on the
train
is able to recover the
laptop
. Thank you. Best regards, odunayo Adeniyi
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