The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie chart presents information about the percentage of
water
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use
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in six lands around the world. At present
water
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is essential to people's lives
for example
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using it for consumption, and the cultivation
industry
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.
To begin
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with,
water
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is
also
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an important source of energy used to sustain life. Our world is divided into 6 main areas. There are North
America
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, South
America
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, Europe ,Africa , Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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. If we talk about North
America
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, using
water
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for
industry
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,
agriculture
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and domestic is 48%, 39% and 13%, sequentially. In South
America
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,they
use
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up to 71% for
agriculture
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use
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followed by domestic
use
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and the
last
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is industrial
use
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. From the
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diagram you can see that South
America
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's
water
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use
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is more used in
agriculture
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than in North
America
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, but North
America
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is mostly used in
industry
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. In Europe, they
use
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the most
water
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for
industry
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,53% of the total followed by
agriculture
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,32% and
finally
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household
use
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is 15%. In Africa Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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. They used the most industrial
water
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, at 84%, 88% and 81% respectively.
In addition
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, Africa and Central
Asia
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have similar
water
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use
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data. In the
last
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continent, South East
Asia
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, they
use
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5% more
water
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in
industry
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than in
agriculture
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. Based on all the data, we can conclude that
water
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is a necessity
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the earth. It can be useful in every way.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, industry, america, asia, agriculture with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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