The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts
step by step
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step-by-step

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procedure
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procedures

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for a handmade violin. The foremost step involves cutting
thin
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a thin

The noun phrase thin piece seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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piece of wood with
saw
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a saw
the saw

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to carve out the front and back parts of the violin.
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f-hole
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an f-hole

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is made in the front part

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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