The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
for a handmade violin.
The foremost step involves cutting
thin
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a thin
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piece of wood with
saw
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a saw
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to carve out the front and back parts of the violin.
Thereafter
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,
f-hole
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an f-hole
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is made in the front part
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