The table illustrates the cost of three environmental projects for sustainable forestry in the next five years. The pie chart, on the other hand, depicts four sectors allocated in the project in the first year.
The
gives
table Verb problem
apply
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
amounted
of Replace the word
amount
money
in five
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a
years
projection that will be used for three environmental Correct your spelling
five-year
projects
for sustainables
forestry, measuredCorrect your spelling
sustainable
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in
dollars
. Moreover
, the pie chart depict
the expenditure which is expected to Change the verb form
depicts
spending
for the first Wrong verb form
be spent
year
of the projects
. It is easily seen that money
spending
on Replace the word
spent
the
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apply
projects
in West America and Central America will decreases
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decrease
graduallys
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gradually
while
much more money
will be spent on the
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apply
project
in Fix the agreement mistake
projects
South-east
Asia during Correct your spelling
Southeast
this
periods
.
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period
Accordion
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According
the
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to the
illustrateds
table, West Africa is forecast to use about 10.5 Correct your spelling
illustrated
million
dollars
in the first year
, however
, money
that spends
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spent
in
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on
this
project is predicted to decrease in the three following years and reach 2.5 million
dollars
in the fourth year
. Then
it will increased
to 3.5 Change the verb form
increase
be increased
million
dollars
in the fifth year
. Similar to the project in Central America, this
projects
is predicted to Change the determiner
project
spend
20 Verb problem
cost
million
dollars
in the first year
, there will be then
a Rephrase
apply
substantially
decrease to 5 Change the adverb
substantial
million
dollars
in the third year
and will be remained
stable until the fifth Wrong verb form
remain
year
.
On the other hand
, South-east
Asia is projected to Correct your spelling
Southeast
spends
30 Change the verb
spend
million
dollars
at the beginnings
of Fix the agreement mistake
beginning
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the give
give
periodChange the form of the verb
given
,
and will Remove the comma
apply
be
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apply
then
decreased
and Wrong verb form
decrease
reached
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reach
million
dollars
in the second year
. After that, the expenditure is predicted to increase to 50 millions
in the fourth and fifth years.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, projects, dollars, year, million with synonyms.
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