Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter • suggest how you could help her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing to you in
regards
Fix the agreement mistake
regard
of
your advertisement printed in the local magazine. I am Change preposition
to
originaly
from Iran and Correct your spelling
originally
currently
I study in Add a comma
,currently
town
near your area. Add an article
a town
the town
Normaly
, every year I go Correct your spelling
Normally
my
country in Change preposition
to my
Correct article usage
the summers
summers
, but for the Fix the agreement mistake
summer
up comming
summer I took a couple of computer courses; Correct your spelling
upcoming
consiquently
, I will stay here and I would have some free times to spend on Correct your spelling
consequently
a
donated community Correct article usage
apply
servises
.
I can help you Correct your spelling
services
service
home
Use synonyms
by
some cleaning Change preposition
with
works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
Also
, I can do your daily Linking Words
shoppings
Fix the agreement mistake
shopping
as well as
repairing and Linking Words
maitaning
your Correct your spelling
maintain
home
Use synonyms
equipments
if it is Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
nesessary
, actually, I am an expert at repairing Correct your spelling
necessary
the
Correct article usage
apply
home
cooling and heating systems.
I am very pleased to say, I am Use synonyms
pasionate
about Correct your spelling
passionate
Linking Words
this
responsibilities and I will Correct determiner usage
these
try
do my best, frankly, because of my mother who lives alone too, usually her neighbourhoods help her Add the particle
totry
home
. Eventually, I believe Use synonyms
this
will make her feel happy Linking Words
as well as
me.
As I said, I took some courses which I plan to Linking Words
Correct your spelling
participate
particpate
in classes Correct your spelling
participate
at
10:00 AM to 2:00 PM on Monday to Friday in the next summer, so, I would be available from 3:00 in the afternoon for a couple of hours untill finishing the works so you can count on my help for these days, but I am affraid I cannot be available at weekends.
Please feel free to ask if you need any forther information.
Your faithfuly,
Mohammadreza.Change preposition
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite