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The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
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The chart below displays the percentage of
men
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 and
women
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 involved in some different types of house works in a particular country and the amount of
time
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 they spent on those tasks per day.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 cooking and cleaning were two tasks that both genders did much and spent the most
time
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 on them. In comparison, the
last
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 home task the two genders were involved in was repairs and they spent minimum
time
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 on them. In
this
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 survey, we discovered that over eighty
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percent
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per cent
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 of females spent
time
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 cooking compared with
sixty
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percent
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per cent
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 of males.
Similarly
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,
while
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 over
sixty
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percent
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per cent
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 of
women
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 spent
time
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 cleaning, just around forty
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percent
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per cent
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 of
men
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 spent
time
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 cleaning.
Women
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 spent more than eighty
minutes
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 cooking and over
sixty
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minutes
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 cleaning per day.
In contrast
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,
men
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 spent less
time
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 than
women
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, spending
sixty
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minutes
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 cooking and approximately 45
minutes
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 cleaning.
However
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, the number of males and females for pet care was the same, they all spent twenty
minutes
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 on
this
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 task.
While
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 the finger for house repairs of
men
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 was double that of
women
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,
men
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 spent more
time
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 on house repairs, reaching around twenty
minutes
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 per day compared with roughly 5
minutes
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 for
women
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, time, percent, sixty, minutes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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