The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
The chart below displays the percentage of
men
and
women
involved in some different types of house works in a particular country and the amount of
time
they spent on those tasks per day.
Overall
,
it is clear that
cooking and cleaning were two tasks that both genders did much and spent the most
time
on them. In comparison, the
last
home task the two genders were involved in was repairs and they spent minimum
time
on them. In
this
survey, we discovered that over eighty
percent
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of females spent
time
cooking compared with
sixty
percent
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per cent
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of males.
Similarly
,
while
over
sixty
percent
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per cent
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of
women
spent
time
cleaning, just around forty
percent
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of
men
spent
time
cleaning.
Women
spent more than eighty
minutes
cooking and over
sixty
minutes
cleaning per day.
In contrast
,
men
spent less
time
than
women
, spending
sixty
minutes
cooking and approximately 45
minutes
cleaning.
However
, the number of males and females for pet care was the same, they all spent twenty
minutes
on
this
task.
While
the finger for house repairs of
men
was double that of
women
,
men
spent more
time
on house repairs, reaching around twenty
minutes
per day compared with roughly 5
minutes
for
women
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, time, percent, sixty, minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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