The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts provide information about several reasons why people migrated from and to the United Kingdom in 2007, measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the majority of society moved in because of job
opportunities and educational purposes, while
others chose to move out because of a definite job
and new work opportunities.
According to
the first pie charts data, people immigrated mostly because of new opportunities in job
and formal education, which accounted for less than a third and just under 30%, respectively. Subsequently
, followed by joining or accompanying others at 15%, slightly higher than looking for a job
at merely 12%, two times higher than no clear reasons at 6%.
Turning to the second pie chart, the purpose of emigration was high because of a definite job
and looking for a job
at just below 30% and 22%. Other than that, people who emigrated with no clear reason was nearly one-fifth, followed by other purposesat
14%, which was more than three times higher than formal education purposesCorrect your spelling
purposes at
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