The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The charts illustrate the proportion of
water
consumption
for various goals in six different areas
in
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the globe.
Overall
, a glance at the charts can reveal there are different purposes in different areas. Most of the
water
consumption
in South East
Asia
, Central
Asia
, Africa, and South
America
is for agricultural purposes and
industrial
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goal is just popular in the other two regions; Europe and North
America
. Domestic
consumption
has the lowest rate among
five
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the five
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areas between them. Approximately about half of the
water
consumption
in North
America
is for industrial
use
and agricultural
use
about 48% and 39% respectively. In South East
Asia
, Central
Asia
, Africa, and South
America
about 81, 88, 84, and 71 of their total
water
percentages are for agricultural aims respectively. Only 7 per cent of the charts of South East
Asia
and Central
Asia
are for Domestic
use
. In Europe, 53% of the total usage belongs to industry, 32% is for agriculture and 15% is for domestic
consumption
. Domestic
use
has 9%, 19% and 13% in Africa, South
America
and North
America
respectively. Only in South
America
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the percentage of the industry is lower than domestic
use
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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