The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure demonstrates the contrast between the progression of Ryemouth in 1995 and its contemporary context. In fact, the village has undergone drastic modifications since the nineties.
Most importantly, the fishing port was extirpated entirely from the ocean.
In addition
, the forest park which was located in the east of the hamlet had vanished and a part of it is supplanted by courts reserved for tennis.
As the village developed, an upsurge is apparent in the number of residents of Ryemouth. Even though the main road remained unchanged, a new subsidiary road is constructed to accommodate transportation. Moreover
, the shops are modified into restaurants, meanwhile, the fish market is superseded by an apartment complex.
On the other hand
, the hotel, along with
the café remained unaltered, although
the hotel has built a car park. Furthermore
, the farmland was slightly augmented and transformed into a golf area with an attached facility to play tennis.Submitted by uthpalakarunathilaka95 on
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