The increasing demand for oil and gas has made it necessary to look for these energy sources in remote and untouched natural places. Do you think the advantages of locating oil and gas in these areas outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these places?

Nowadays, the need for oil and gas has been increasing which forced us to locate more of them from those undiscovered areas. Generally speaking, there are both advantages and disadvantages to digging out these sources. From my perspective, the cons are far more than
pros
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for a bunch of reasons I stated below. First of all, the damage to the earth could
last
forever because these two types of sources are not recyclable, which means once they are used, they could never go back to their original status within hundreds of years. As everybody knows, they are deeply hidden in the land, to reach it, we have to remove the soil on the top by simply exploding them all. In current South America,
for instance
, many sites showed that these holes or gaps made by the explosion are too huge to fill in and they will be permanent scars. At the same time, they brought catastrophic consequences to the local people for its changes to the terrains, the agricultural related to the soil and relevant people's life.
Secondly
,
on the other hand
, the cost is beyond imagination. The transport, machines, researches and
labours
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weigh too much in expenses. By measuring the outcome,
such
developments are so unnecessary.
In addition
to
this
, they are
also
totally avoidable because
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clean energy which is easy to obtain has already proved its enormous volume, underestimated value and
further
potential. As far as I know, in China, most of
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abandoned the fire electricities empowered by oil and shifted to the power generated by the wind and water. In a word, negative effects completely beat positive effects, so the advantages definitely don't outweigh the disadvantages. The oil and gas used to provide us benefits far more than anything else,
however
, it could not fit in the situation anymore.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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