Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using cars?

In recent times, science and technology have advanced a lot. With the advancement in technology, our lives have become much easier than what it was in the past. Over the past thirty years, the
ownership
of
cars
has rapidly increased.
This
over possession
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of
cars
has
consequently
increased the
traffic
on roads. In my opinion,
this
statement is true. I strongly think that the
government
should take the necessary steps to regulate the
traffic
on roads. With time, there is a huge increase in
car
ownership
. Most people, especially youths, are very obsessed with
cars
. Most people own a
car
. They have several reasons which are personal and professional as well. The first reason is that with the
ownership
of
cars
, they have the authority to travel anywhere, anytime, they want. Taking public
transport
also
leads to much more time than it is required to reach a certain destination.
Secondly
, the
government
has made
car
loans from banks very easy to access. It is very convenient and hassle-free these days to buy a
car
. As the availability and affordability of the
car
are easy,
hence
people tend to
use
them even for a short
journey
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journeys
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.
This
has led to the
congestion
of
traffic
.
Also
, another reason for
traffic
is the humongous number of vehicles on the road. Apart from private
cars
, there are public
transport
and carrier vehicles
although
it creates
a
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huge
traffic
congestion
.
Also
, the inadequate road infrastructure is a major reason for
this
congestion
. I believe that the
government
should take
necessary
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measures, and encourage local citizens to
use
public
transport
.
Also
, to lessen the
use
of private
cars
, governments should impose taxes, so that it can lessen the
use
of private
cars
.
To conclude
, I would like to say that I strongly believe
due to
this
ownership
of
cars
,
traffic
congestion
has increased in recent years.
However
, I
also
think that the
government
should introduce cheaper public
transport
with better facilities to curb
traffic
congestion
.
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