The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The tables show how Fairtrade coffee and banana

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changed in five countries in 2004 compared to 1999.

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, Coffee

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rose in all countries with the highest

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observed in Switzerland. Banana

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also

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rose in all but two countries and were highest in the UK. In 1999, the most significant coffee

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, 3 million (3m) euros were reported in Switzerland, and they doubled in 2004. The figure for the UK was originally 50% lower than that for Switzerland (1.5m)

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in Denmark were slightly higher (1.8m).

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the former rose dramatically to 20m, the latter remained relatively stable. There was little difference between the figures for Belgium (1m) and Sweden (0.8m), and

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experienced noticeable increases to 1.7m and 1m, respectively. The UK had the highest banana

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years, as they rose over threefold from 15 million euros to 47m. Swiss

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were originally almost twice as high as those of Denmark (1 and 0.6m, respectively), and

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surged, reaching 5.5 and 4m. There was little difference between the figures for Sweden and Belgium (2 and 1.8m, respectively), and

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nearly halved to reach about 1m in 2004.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Fairtrade-labelled
sales figures
percentage increase/decrease
European countries
sales volume
notable trend
exponential growth
moderate rise
marked decline
comparative analysis
economic factors
consumer preferences

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Discussion Some people get into debt buying things they don’t need and can’t ‎afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour?What action can be taken ‎to prevent people having this problem?‎

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?