You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment. Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter •explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company •say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her •tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.

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Dear Mr Ahmadi, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I want to resign from my position. Please let me elaborate on my reasons. As you probably know I just finished my education, and I obtained my master's degree, so it is time for me to work in an industry related to my position. Since all of your full-time positions are in the tourism industry, it would not be helpful for my career path to work in your company. My intention is to work in a local bank as a financial analyst so that I can use my theoretical knowledge in practice.

However

, it does not mean that I have not had a wonderful experience working in your company. I have gained invaluable experience during the past 3 years and I am really grateful for the help and support which is provided by you and the other employees.

Lastly

, I want to notify you that I will be available until September 19 ,and I will other employees through the process of handover. Sincerely yours, Amir Ghasemi

Submitted by amirghas92 on Mon May 29 2023

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