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some people beleive that it is best to accept a bad situations,such as an unstatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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community
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 have different viewpoints about how to accept a not good event in work or less financially.
While
 others suppose that we should try to do it and improve it every day. I personally believe that when
public
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are
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 hard working and always
find
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 a way to deal with any problems so the situation will get better. On the one hand,
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 have a habit to accept some mistakes or they tend to stay with poor lives.
This
 is because they might not understand what is exactly they can do. Plus, they tend to untrust themselves because maybe they might
also
 not know what they need to do better.
On the other hand
, I think there are many measures that we can strengthen our life situation.
Firstly
,
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 can spend all of their time doing good things like learning, researching, hard working and even cooking.
This
 leads to better their mind and because of that they
also
 can improve the situation.
Secondly
,
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 should start doing something right away so that they do have not time to hesitate about whether or not bad results. And
then
 they can concentrate on working and living. In conclusion, despite
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these
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 I suppose that if
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 do things at their best, they will get the best evaluations in the future.
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