You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: •Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. •State what your skills and experience are. •Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

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letter in regard to inquiring about the unpaid volunteer job in some underdeveloped nation. I am always been so keen to work in poor countries, so I could be helpful to poor people and can do something better for the world. Essential, I am a certified nanny, and very good at taking care of small children.

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for five years, if required I can provide some reference for my background check.

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, have some experience in cooking,

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field, but I have taken a couple of lessons from some professionals if that could count as an experience

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I am happy to volunteer in any cooking facilities too. Recently, I have been watching a documentary on the orphanage in South Africa about the lack of staff shortage, so if possible that I could be recruited to South Africa to support the poor children to provide some care. I am looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Simran

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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