The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk production for commercial sale.
The illustration demonstrates how the
milk
is processed and produced for retail purposes.
From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, the process commences with cows grazing and ends with Linking Words
milk
and Use synonyms
dairy
products being sold in Use synonyms
shop
. It is an 8-stage, linear, man-made process.
The first stage begins when cows are allowed to graze on agricultural land so that they can produce Add an article
the shop
milk
. They are Use synonyms
then
milked twice a day by machinery and stored Linking Words
it
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apply
into
a refrigerator to ensure that it stays fresh. A Change preposition
in
milk
tanker collects the Use synonyms
milk
and delivers the Use synonyms
milk
to a Use synonyms
dairy
where the process can be continued Use synonyms
further
.
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After
Linking Words
this
step is complete, the Linking Words
dairy
is ready to produce and convert the Use synonyms
milk
into either pasteurized Use synonyms
and
packaged Correct word choice
or
milk
so that it will be more Use synonyms
straightforwardly
and convenient for customers to use, or it is turned into various kinds of Change the word
square
milk
Use synonyms
dairy
Use synonyms
such
as cheese, cream and butter that can be sold. Once the Linking Words
last
step has been completed, all of the items are sent to supermarkets and shops in order to be sold to the public.Linking Words
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